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This is held true even in the past as one can see in Riis’s book when he describes(sp) a community’s changed appearance “The garden gate no longer swung on it rusty hinges. The shell-paved walk had become an alley; what the rear house had left of a garden, a court” (5). Now that you see the similarity(ic) in how communities where negatively affected by containing immigrants and you can experience the perspective in which fellow citizens view immigrants.
Both of your quotes were great examples toward your topic and the use of your signal phrases was correct too.
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