Sunday, October 16, 2011

English Composition: First Paragraph of my 2Syn Paper

English Composition: First Paragraph of my 2Syn Paper: How has dieting changed from Kellogg’s era to today’s generation? How has it stayed the same? By looking further into the two docume...

I feel that your first paragraph does a real good job of simply stating what your paper will be about. From reading it I can expect your paper to analyze how dieting has come up throughout history and gained public attention to the point where it is so easily evident in today's society.

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